Sedina B-8

Sharingan stared into the vast void of space. In its emptyness, floating inside his battered rev c. Hearing the proximity alert, he looked at his radar, registering a ship signal. It was red, an itan pilot from the coalition, in its signature ship, the valkyrie.
After taking a quick glance at his ships operational systems and targeting the opponent, he prepared to boost towards the incoming enemy.
Almost immidiately after he had started the boosting sequence, he saw a large warp exit opening. Coming out, was the IDV SOLA, commanded by Omega O.
Hitting the brakes, took quick evasive manuevers to escape the incoming blasts of its turrets, which could easily rip apart his rev c. Boosting away to a safe distance, without being able to do nothing but stare at the large ship, which had emerged victorious from the last capital ship battle.
Greeted by the joyful Omega through the comm, he greeted back and decided to warp out through the worm hole. Staying to fight the SOLA was pointless. The dual neutron blasters MkIII fitted in his ship wouldnt even scratch it.
While thinking "this is madness", he activated the warping sequence. Midwarp, other thoughts came to him...
The growing population of itani pilots, the serco military reduced to a few numbers, itans raiding the convoys carrying the valuable xcithrite....
He warped out, unable to shake a feeling of despair, thinking about the dark dreadful future of the Serco race.

Note: This is my first try as a writer and english isnt my first languaje.

It's very well written. Good work.

Hey it looks good and more practice it will get better keep it up.

Elbryon[ITAN}

Very nice.