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I did share my reasoning, but you addressed only the Lady Serco question. I am referencing the guideline in the OP: your news item could be confusing to others. The guidelines I posted at the beginning of this thread are clearer than the guidelines I was provided.
After reading such a story, one might reasonably conclude that there is some action in Pyronis, and that one might be able to find enemies on the border. One might also wonder who Lady Serco is, since it is not in the back-story. Sounds disappointing and confusing. Don't get me wrong: I like the idea of Lady Serco (though I think you invoked her improperly here) but she's not a part of the approved story.
You wrote:
"Attention! More than ten elite Serco Fleet officers are violently killed without any reason by outlanders in Pyronis. SkyCommand reports outlaws are still raiding Serco/Grey border systems, causing fear and horror to all known Dominion forces. If situation won't change, rumored Serco Lady may temporaly lose control of mining outpost in Helios."
After reading such a story, one might reasonably conclude that there is some action in Pyronis, and that one might be able to find enemies on the border. One might also wonder who Lady Serco is, since it is not in the back-story. Sounds disappointing and confusing. Don't get me wrong: I like the idea of Lady Serco (though I think you invoked her improperly here) but she's not a part of the approved story.
You wrote:
"Attention! More than ten elite Serco Fleet officers are violently killed without any reason by outlanders in Pyronis. SkyCommand reports outlaws are still raiding Serco/Grey border systems, causing fear and horror to all known Dominion forces. If situation won't change, rumored Serco Lady may temporaly lose control of mining outpost in Helios."
Subject: Space Truckers: From Deneb to Odia
Message body:
We are neutral trade guild operating from Deneb to Odia. We deliver anything needed and don't ask questions. We also make and sell fcp and other cap ship parts.
We accept any space truckers or guards that want to join the guild.
If you have job for us, contact any active ST members, council, lieutenants, or commander oldbird in the game and we will be happy to assist you.
Akceepua,
ST council
Message body:
We are neutral trade guild operating from Deneb to Odia. We deliver anything needed and don't ask questions. We also make and sell fcp and other cap ship parts.
We accept any space truckers or guards that want to join the guild.
If you have job for us, contact any active ST members, council, lieutenants, or commander oldbird in the game and we will be happy to assist you.
Akceepua,
ST council
Done. I altered the reference to "the game" as a nod to immersion.
Subject: Marketing Networks looking for Haulers.
Message: The current neutral guild of the International marketing network [IMN] is now recruiting new traders, or anyone that wants to help the player-to-player economy.
If you are in need of a current item, please contact a hauler of ours, preferrably on channel 1800. We also manufacture capital ship parts, which prices can be defined at imn.guildportal.com.
Thanks, IMN
Message: The current neutral guild of the International marketing network [IMN] is now recruiting new traders, or anyone that wants to help the player-to-player economy.
If you are in need of a current item, please contact a hauler of ours, preferrably on channel 1800. We also manufacture capital ship parts, which prices can be defined at imn.guildportal.com.
Thanks, IMN
Done. I cleaned up spelling, grammar, and Non-RP references.
Done