NOOOOO Touriaus! I am your father! Search your feelings, you know it to be true!

You may want to think about splitting your dialogue up a bit more. It would make it a bit easier to understand.

Other then that not a half bad story.

Poor Shape, being accused of being a man. Now, if Shapenaji would like to repremand you, it's up to HER, but I'm not going any farther.

Hunh? Shape's a chica?